Hey Sonny, you're poem is really great. Except, when you talk about the tree being tall, you use it twice, which seems a little repetitive. Also, it was really confusing with your pictures.
Your poem was very nicely constructed with a very good title. One thing that was not very good was that your pictures were not close to the lines which they related to, I had to find the line that fits well with the picture which was pretty confusing.
Your poem was filled with a lot of detail and experience but your links and images were set up in a weird way and I would recommend tweaking it just a little bit.
Hey Sonny, you're poem is really great. Except, when you talk about the tree being tall, you use it twice, which seems a little repetitive. Also, it was really confusing with your pictures.
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ReplyDeleteYour poem was very nicely constructed with a very good title. One thing that was not very good was that your pictures were not close to the lines which they related to, I had to find the line that fits well with the picture which was pretty confusing.
ReplyDeleteYour poem was filled with a lot of detail and experience but your links and images were set up in a weird way and I would recommend tweaking it just a little bit.
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