Two Voice Poem
By: Sonny S.
Pages read: 94
3/17/15
Squirrel BOTH Bone
I've been hunting for days,
trying to make a shelter
trying to make a shelter
I've been stolen from home, and
can't find a way back
We fight for each-other
I'm lost in this open world
I'm trapped in this closed world
It's hard in the outside
I need a challenge on the inside
We're lost in the world
There are people here,
I was told to stay away
I was taught how to hunt,
and now I have to use it
Kidnapped and wounded
It's tough out here, not knowing
where to go
The stairs are my challenge,
but escaping is my destiny
We need to know where to go
Claustrophobic inside this place,
it feels like I can't breathe
There's too much space for me to
see
We need moderate, cant's have
too much, nor too little
They took my brother while I was
there
I hope my sister is alright,
I need to find her, need to fight
We worked together,
now apart
We must keep going, accept
our losses
I need to find him, I can't accept it
We are physically moving,
but not mentally
In the darkness, fear awaits
I can not do this, it's not my fate
But we need to just have as much faith
Hope
We keep moving
My life depends on my senses,
on my reflexes, on my skills
I get everything I need, empty and filled
I need a friend by my side
I need to run and just go hide
I have the courage and
determination
I can't find where my strength is
We keep moving forth
We try
We fail
We fly
We drown
We jump
We fall
We run
We walk
We live
We die
And it all comes back to us
All depends on us
Creates us
Creates out future
We try and fail, the only true
failure is when we stop trying...
try again
Sonny I really liked your poem although it was very tricky to understand it because of formatting reasons. Besides this I think that this was really well done and well executed. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteGreat Job! I really liked how both Squirrel and Bone were eager to find each other and how they never gave up
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